Le'questionne le Rough Cut

(FEEDBACK AND QUESTIONS ABOUT THE ROUGH CUT)

1) What do you think of the lip syncing?

- Was okay but slightly out of sync in places


2) Is the order/variety of shots okay?

- Yes, it was interesting, in particular how we cut from performance to the narrative

3) Is the cinematography any good?

- Yes, especially the shot of the drummer from below
- The contrast between the bright performance stage to the darkness of the bedroom

4) Is the overall effect any good?

- Yes because it keeps the audience interested due to the variety of shots
- Could be improved by addition of stage lighting/added effects




OUR COMMENTS

- It was commented that we didn't have to lighten the shots of Emily because the contrast was good, but we are still going to lighten them a little bit because we feel that they are a bit too dark and sometimes too difficult to see.

- We have taken out the main lip syncing piece because it was too out of sync and we are going to replace it with another shot.

- We are considering adding effects, but are going to put the whole thing together first and seeing if we have time to add anything and see if it looks any good.